Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) 4 Love In Loves, Holy Woman* by exegesisme Love In loves I use all my love Around you Do you feel I am a man You are a woman I love you Represent all men Can I All in my dream You are my ideal I meet you just now After a storm My love passed a test * Introduction for discussion or topics of the coming series: 1 I will post all my poems about Holy Woman in this thread beside the first three poems. 2 I hope I can finish the expected series in this thread. 3 It is all about love, beauty, aesthetics, with symbols from holy bible, other classical works, and mythologies. 4 All sorts of positive and valuable contributions are welcome and admitted, your knowledge will be really challenged by following the series. 5 I promise to send you something making sure of your positive and valuable contribution after I finish the series, no matter it is published or not, as long as you concern something to awake you your contribution here. 6 For example, you may discuss who might be the holy woman, or the qualifications to be a holy woman. 7 You may discuss all sorts of love in all sorts of works, theories, or historical figures. 8 You may imagine what sort of love is your ideal or dream. 9 What is essence of love, what is nature of love, are they the some or different? 10 How to improve the level of love practically in real living? What is the major difference or differences between a real love and an imagine love? What are the relations of love with other emotions? 11 According to physics, the whole universe was from a point. According to bible, the whole universe is being from the Word. I hope you see each word in my poem is an image of the Word. 12 I hope there are enough readers discussing by your own. You can imagine you are the poet, can you represent all men or all women to love? Edited January 16, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derek 2.0 Posted January 16, 2016 Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 10 How to improve the level of love practically in real living? In my opinion, your answer can be found within Ephesians 5:33: Nevertheless let every one of you in particular so love his wife even as himself; and the wife see that she reverence her husband. In other words, an "improved love" is gained with a foundation of mutual respect. --------------- What is the major difference or differences between a real love and an imagine love? I spoke to "real love" above, as to "imagined love", returning to the manual, look to Romans 16:17-18: Now I urge you, brethren, note those who cause divisions and offenses, contrary to the doctrine which you learned, and avoid them. For those who are such do not serve our Lord Jesus Christ, but their own belly, and by smooth words and flattering speech deceive the hearts of the simple. As such, imagined love is only a plight brought upon the simple minded, those ignorant of our Lord Jesus Christ, that would use words to deceive another, as opposed to the above mentioned foundation of mutual respect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 12 A great sign appeared in heaven: a woman clothed with the sun, with the moon under her feet and a crown of twelve stars on her head. 2 She was pregnant and cried out in pain as she was about to give birth. 3 Then another sign appeared in heaven: an enormous red dragon with seven heads and ten horns and seven crowns on its heads. http://www.mapleleafweb.com/forums/topic/25481-4-love-in-loves-holy-woman/ Background of my inspiration about the coming series. Certainly, there is backgrounds of background, but I will limit to the direct background of the Holy Woman. Few days ago I got a message from a dream, which advised me change my style of writing. Last Saturday, I went to Toronto Japanese Seventh-day Adventist Church for bible study, one of the scriptures is in revelation 13, which made me notice revelation 12. I were (continue later) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) 5 I Was I Were, Holy Woman* by exegesisme If you are her I was If you are you I were What difference I from I was To I were I from I were To I was What difference Tested Or not tested More tested Or less tested What difference *For discussion: trying to point out the differences, the contribution of Derek 2.0 in this poem. Is there any relation between this poem and Holy Bible, the real world or universe, history or future? Or any others you feel meaningful and inclusive. Edited January 16, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derek 2.0 Posted January 16, 2016 Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 Few days ago I got a message from a dream, which advised me change my style of writing. Last Saturday, I went to Toronto Japanese Seventh-day Adventist Church for bible study, one of the scriptures is in revelation 13, which made me notice revelation 12. I were (continue later) You might need to revisit Revelation 5: Then I saw in the right hand of him who sat on the throne a scroll with writing on both sides and sealed with seven seals. And I saw a mighty angelproclaiming in a loud voice, “Who is worthy to break the seals and open the scroll?” But no one in heaven or on earth or under the earth could open the scroll or even look inside it. Furthermore: And I beheld, and, lo, in the midst of the throne and of the four beasts, and in the midst of the elders, stood a Lamb as it had been slain, having seven horns and seven eyes, which are the seven Spirits of God sent forth into all the earth. And he came and took the book out of the right hand of him that sat upon the throne But remember: Saying with a loud voice, Worthy is the Lamb that was slain to receive power, and riches, and wisdom, and strength, and honour, and glory, and blessing. And every creature which is in heaven, and on the earth, and under the earth, and such as are in the sea, and all that are in them, heard I saying, Blessing, and honour, and glory, and power, be unto him that sitteth upon the throne, and unto the Lamb for ever and ever. Meaning the Lamb had to be killed to be revered........false Lambs will be ignored (at worse) or killed by Federal agents (at best) and maybe receive mention in their own Wikipedia page.....steer clear of hubris and eagerness if you want to see the face of God.....and remember, those that don't are made mention in Revelation 20: And the devil that deceived them was cast into the lake of fire and brimstone, where the beast and the false prophet are, and shall be tormented day and night for ever and ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) 7 Glory In Me, Holy Woman*by exegesisme Glory in me I do not know Until I see you Holy down to you And then up You continue nurture Your other children Witnesses in them Went through 666 Prepared until 777 All are forgotten Until I see you The way of Christ Is seen from you You are my mother *For discussion: the identity of Holy Mother, or others you are inspired from this poem. Edited January 16, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) 7:31 AM 2016-01-16 8 Dream In Girl, Holy Woman by exegesisme Dream in girl Frog on foot Along genome Creation Evolution Future glory Each on time The seventh day Holy sleep For preparation Palace* What a beauty Each of you Will see her or him I promise *Palace for discussion: the beauty you find when you look for in your inside where God prepares for you continuously without letting you know. And future glory is what you should look for, to cooperate the creation of God. Edited January 16, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) 7:45 AM 2016-01-169 Tree Of Life, Holy Woman by exegesisme Tree of life Your spirit Your genome Four billion years* Your miracle How many possibilities In inside carefully How many possibilities Near and far farther hierarchically Holy order You are in See with your eye freely Yes with test Morality ethics law *For discussion: What is four billion years old in you, why? Edited January 16, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) 8:07 AM 2016-01-16⑩Running For Being, Holy Woman by exegesisme Running for being How may eggs Less than a few How many sperms Less than one billion Crowning crowning Only one pair From so many Morality ethics law Here what are they From one cell To one human fetus To one human baby To one human adult To one dignity away* *For discussion: the meaning of one dignity away. Edited January 16, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) 8:26 AM 2016-01-16①① Morality Ethics Law, Holy Woman by exegesisme Morality ethics law Being ultimately Being essentially Being Naturally What difference A human living Being spiritually Being mindfully Being soulfully How to integrate An individual Being a private Being in family Being a citizen How to account* *For discussion: How to account the three different dimensions of the same individual? Edited January 16, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) 2:35 PM 2016-01-16 ①② Being Language, Holy Woman by exegesisme A word A being A line An organ Being language A fetus Being in mother A word Being in line Life in niche Discover Clean out wastes Build a wall with a door* Future this side History the other *For discussion: What is the door? What is its function? Edited January 16, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 2:52 PM 2016-01-16 ①③ How Do You Being, Holy Woman by exegesisme How do you being Being at end Being in future Being at now Being in history Different being Different living Different goal Different after living God works on your preparation I being in meaning Enjoy meaning being Child plays toy bricks I play meaning Aesthetics of meaning* *For discussion: aesthetics of meaning, do you have any sense of beauty of meaning? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 16, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 (edited) My poetry may be seen as a series of experiments for discovering new expression, new meaning, and new beauty. As in poem 4, love in loves, if you love a girl, you may put all your other loves around the girl. As in poem 5, I was I were, "I was" means I as an observed object, "I were" means I as a conversation partner. As in poem 7, Glory in me, means grace of God in me, no matter I know or do not know. As in poem 8, flog along genome, implies flog in line of genome is ancestry of human, God creates human step by step expressed in Bible as days. As in poem 9, four billion years, implies the age of human genome from its beginning to now. As in poem ⑩, Running for being, expresses the only pair of a few eggs with a large number of sperms; one dignity away, how to approach human being dying of dignity is an important issue. As in poem①①, How to account an individual three identities of a private being, a family member, and a public citizen, is still a challenge for any individual. As in poem①②, Being language, may become an important idea. For God is Word, so a language being may be more important than a human being, even a people. As the influence of Hellenic language. As in poem①③, Aesthetics of meaning for beauty of meaning, my new mental tool for exploring new meaning. Edited January 17, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 12:36 AM 2016-01-17 ①④ Experiencing, Holy Woman by exegesisme Experiencing Heavenly beauty Terrible Hell Both in circle With inner endorphin* Great thanks To great God The perfect one The only perfect one Holy woman person of you My V My faith All are free I tell you Here now** For discussion: *①A series of great physiological and medical discoveries was made just now, from cooperation of my meditation and creation of God. **②Remembering this moment, 12:54 AM 2016-01-17, my V is holy father, holy son, holy spirit, holy woman, holy hope; my faith is God, liberty, family, living, property. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 1:13 AM 2016-01-17 ①⑤ I trust, Holy Woman by exegesisme I trust On faith I check On experience My living on both Hierarchical faith Hierarchical experience Integration of both Forming Knowledge God is being Crowning as inspiration Which automatically on you Apparently from nothing* Ultimately from God *For discussion: is nothing really nothing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 2:30 AM 2016-01-17 ①⑥ A Program, Holy Woman by exegesisme A program Designs all programs Automatically And refining them Morally ethically lawfully A computer Crowning All computers A real story In system of God Liberty Governs freedom Great cooperating system* Reputing goodness Closing evil *For discussion: what is the great cooperating system? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 2:53 AM 2016-01-17 ①⑦ A point, Holy Woman by exegesisme A point I am From I Four axes are Each with an imagination* Balances between Each axis And her imagination Four axes four imaginations In a great balance I am the point At the core I am humbly Touch their desires Both real and imagining *For discussion: there are a mathematical structure and a great mystery in this poem, what are they? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 3:12 AM 2016-01-17 ①⑧ Symmetry, Holy Woman by exegesisme Symmetry High dimensionally Tending lower With hope Imperfectly Silence My attitude As preparation For the sounds appear Cooperate with me All my work Is the preparation The crowning Over two hopes Completing them* *For discussion: images of the completing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charles Anthony Posted January 17, 2016 Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 BREAK TIME Your next posts need to explain thes poems you posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 (edited) My poetry may be seen as a series of experiments for discovering new expression, new meaning, and new beauty. As in poem 4, love in loves, if you love a girl, you may put all your other loves around the girl. As in poem 5, I was I were, "I was" means I as an observed object, "I were" means I as a conversation partner. As in poem 7, Glory in me, means grace of God in me, no matter I know or do not know. As in poem 8, flog along genome, implies flog in line of genome is ancestry of human, God creates human step by step expressed in Bible as days. As in poem 9, four billion years, implies the age of human genome from its beginning to now. As in poem ⑩, Running for being, expresses the only pair of a few eggs with a large number of sperms; one dignity away, how to approach human being dying of dignity is an important issue. As in poem①①, How to account an individual three identities of a private being, a family member, and a public citizen, is still a challenge for any individual. As in poem①②, Being language, may become an important idea. For God is Word, so a language being may be more important than a human being, even a people. As the influence of Hellenic language. As in poem①③, Aesthetics of meaning for beauty of meaning, my new mental tool for exploring new meaning. Do you think these are explanations or not? Could you be an actual reader, an actual commentator, and a real discoverer of the meaning of these poems? I suggest you register another account for interaction with me and being a discoverer of the meaning of these poems, which may possibly make you very famous and profitable in future. However, one thing you should remember, Creation of God is all, in front of which you should be humble. Edited January 17, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 And remember, it might be a process of reforming yourself. So, you should prepare to accept challenge, and prevent yourself use your power here unwisely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 For example, you can try to choose one which touches you most, and do a formal comment about it with all your power of imagination God gives you, and leave what you are not certain to me interact with you. Through this way, you may be possibly become one of my cooperator to create something new in Canada first, and then the whole world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 My meaning needs you to do your effort to discover according to your whole experience, your whole protential, and more importantly, your whole share of grace from God. Being an example for others how to get benefits from these poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 (edited) Going out of your usual box, challenging your whole imagination, challenging your whole potential, challenging your whole old share of grace from God, doing research on your whole knowledge and experience, and then exploring your circle in which your new share of grace from God in coming along with the new name of the Christ (revelation 3:12). Edited January 17, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exegesisme Posted January 17, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2016 (edited) A suggestion for reading and understanding of this series of my poetry, a reader should see them together or any one of them as a bridge, one side are her or his present knowledge, experience, and desire, the other side is her or his unknown desire, potential, unknown goal, unknown chance, and ultimate mission God prepares for her or him. My poems here are a pure form with some implications for you, you should fill in them with your own life for whole touch and understanding. Edited January 17, 2016 by Exegesisme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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